Sunday, April 5, 2020

Week 10 Story: Life as an Elephant

Author's Note: I've been having way too much fun researching the birthing processes for different animals. The miracle of life is just so beautiful! I'm a little afraid of what my YouTube recommendations will look like after this class is over though... This story is written in 2nd person perspective to give the reader the experience of living as an elephant. All of the events in this story are based on Ellen C. Babbitt's Jatakas Tales (in order of appearance) The King's White Elephant, Grannie's Blackie, and The Elephant Girly-Face. See if you can recognize the individual stories!

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You are surrounded by warmth and darkness. It's comfortable, but there's a pressure slowly building. The squeezing gets stronger and stronger until it's almost unbearable... then you fall and land on a hard surface. You blink your eyes open, but that's about all of the strength you can muster. This new world is bright and hot. You feel something big and hard nudge you bottom. Despite the many looming figures circling you, you know that it's your mother who has gently kicked you. She continues to prod and poke you with her feet and trunk as if to say "stand up!" The other giants hovering around you begin to join in.

"I have to stand up! I have to stand up now!"

You don't know where the thought comes from, but as soon as it enters your head you begin struggling to get your legs under you. You manage to roll onto your stomach. It takes all of your might to push up onto you front legs. You feel someone's trunk slide under your rear end and lift you onto all fours. You wrap your trunk around your mother's for support and balance, and you take your first unsteady steps...

The first twenty years of your life pass by without incident. Lately however, there have been some minor mishaps. the most recent one leaving your father with a large splinter in his front left foot. It had swollen to the point that he was left limping around on three legs. Then one day he returned from the forest walking on his injured foot again. Apparently some humans had helped him by removing the splinter and washing his wound. For the next few years, your father would always return to the forest to help the humans pull trees out of the ground. One day he came to you and said, "son I'm getting old. The humans in the forest have done me a great service and ultimately saved my life. However, I am unable to continue to carry their trees as fast or as far as I used to. It is time you take my place."

You have always wanted to meet these forest humans, so you agree and follow your father into the forest the next day. You assume your father's duties and even play in the river with the little humans each night. They enjoy climbing on you and their giggles and shrieks bring you such joy! One day however, a new human appears on the bank and watches while you work to pull up trees. At the end of the day, one of the forest humans takes your trunk in his hands and gently leads you to the shiny man. He takes your trunk and begins to gently lead you away from the group. You glance back at all of your tiny human friends splashing in the water. You hesitate, but the forest humans have given you no reason to not trust them so you turn and follow the man.

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The next few years aren't unpleasant, but you are very lonely. Sensing this, the shiny man takes you to a new village and leaves you with an older lady. She is just the sweetest and lets you play with the village children everyday while she works! "She works very hard," you think to yourself one day. "I wonder what I can do to help?" You notice that she brings home little shiny pieces of metal everyday after work.

As luck would have it, a man and his oxen were stuck in the river the next day. You wade into the cool water and slowly drag all of his carts out. When you finish, the man pulls a bunch of that shiny metal out! As you wonder how you should carry the metal back home, one of the children yells at the man. She seems upset so you stay to make sure she is alright. The two argue back and forth for a bit before you see the man pull out even more metal! He puts it in a bag and ties it to your neck. The little girls smiles at you and holds your trunk as the two of you walk back home.

The look on your older lady's face when she opens the bag made it worth all the hard work you did, so you go back out and help the villagers everyday from then on out.

Life is good going forward. One night you are snoozing by the fence when you hear men talking. You can't understand them, but something about the tone in their voices sets you on edge. You open your eyes, but hold still so it will seem like you're still asleep. Suddenly the men climb over the wall and walk right past you. They're all carrying shiny objects look sharp. You slowly get to your feet, extend your trunk so that it's right behind their heads, and let out the loudest trumpet you can muster. The group immediately drops to the ground covering their ears as lights come on in the house. Your instincts must have been right, because the old lady gives you the biggest treat you've ever seen the next morning!

The rest of you life is peaceful and pleasant. The children grow up and soon you have new tiny humans to play with. As time passes, it gets harder and harder to stand up in the mornings. One day, you know your time has come. You lay down and let out a small trumpet to get your family's attention. The old lady had passed a while ago, but her children had stayed with you. They come out and give you lots of hugs. They seem to know what you do, there isn't much time left. They all lay on you in a big group hug as you close your eyes and slowly drift off into nothingness, feeling the love of your humans in your final moments...

4 comments:

  1. Hi Jessica! Just from the start - with your title - I was already intrigued to read your story! I have also recently read the three Jataka Tales that you have based your story from (The King's White Elephant, Grannie's Blackie, and The Elephant Girly-Face). I really enjoyed these tales but I loved how you have provided your own twist based off the tales. It is brand new story but the roots are still evident. Great job!

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  2. Hello Jessica

    I had a wonderful time reading your story about the elephant. I love elephants so seeing this story made me excited. There were some parts of the story that confused me such as the shiny man and that a man took the elephant away from his herd. I found myself feeling anxious because I thought something bad was going to happen to the elephant. I thought that man was a poacher and that he was going to kill the elephant. I thought it was really sad when you described how the elephant glanced back at his friends and family when he man took him away. He never reunited with them. Something that I thought was unique was how you made the elephant stay with the humans instead of returning back to his herd. That elephant sure does enjoy people! Above all, good story!

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  3. Hi Jessica!
    I agree! I think the process of creating and birth is so fascinating. And I think elephants are adorable, so this was the perfect story for me! I thought it was interesting how instead of showing the elephants interaction with other elephants, the theme surrounded this elephant interacting with humans. And with this, the elephant is exposed to almost every emotion-- fear, love, curiosity, and more.

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  4. Hi Jessica,
    The difference in animal births is very interesting, I like how different animal births can be depending on the species. I think the decision to write in 2nd person was a very smart decision. It creates a much better perspective on the birth. It really puts the reader into the process better than a first person perspective could.

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