Friday, February 28, 2020

Week 7 Story: Final Life as a Horse

You have been warm and cozy for a few months now, but things have been getting tight lately. There's nowhere to move your legs no matter which way you turn. Today is the day, you just know it! You feel the walls begin closing in around you, even tighter than before. Then everything goes black. You feel yourself land on a hard surface and the space around you is suddenly cold. You snap your eyes open and quickly try to stand on shaky legs. It doesn't go so well, you'll have to practice. There are so many new sights and sounds. It's all so overwhelming. You turn towards the only source of heat in the area, it's your mother. You don't know how you know it's her, but she nuzzles you as you drink some milk from her.

The years pass rather uneventfully. You live a good life in a clean stable. The farmer and his family treat you well, and the youngest daughter likes to sneak you extra carrots in the evening. Then all of a sudden things change. A large group of men surround the outside of your stall one day. They argue with the farmer for some time, though you cannot understand what is being said. You are after all, just a horse. They keep motioning to you as they talk, so you turn around in your stall and ignore them. Later that night, the whole family comes out to see you, and one by one they give you a big hug and a treat. You're not sure what that group of men said to the farmer earlier, but it seems to have upset your family. Not matter, you'll just give them a good swift kick if you see that group again.

Sure enough, the men return a few days later. The farmer places your lead on and hands it to one of them. This is my chance! you think to yourself. I saw the farmer's eldest daughter kick a boy in between his legs once and he fell right to the ground, so that's where I'll aim! As soon as the man leads you out of the stall you start bucking. No way are you gonna let these crazies take you away from your family! You spin and your lead slips out of the stranger's hand. Now's my chance! You rear back and kick as hard as you can in his direction. Bullseye! The poor man collapses and you whinny in excitement. You then turn your ahead to see a look of pure horror and shock on the farmer's face. He grabs your lead rope and hands it off to his wife before rushing to help the man to his feet. The farmer's wife comes up to you and you think, she's here thank me, I bet. After that nasty man made everyone so sad yesterday I think I should get extra treats with dinner toni- wait, why does she sound angry? I just did this family a favor! So you soon discover that the farmer was intentionally giving you away. The audacity! Your new home had better have an all you can eat apple bar!

While your new owner's stable did not, afterall, have an all you can eat apple bar (what a shame), they did let you roam free after only two nights.

You are led out into the field behind the barn. There are hundreds of people all standing around staring at you. The same man who brought you here ties a golden plaque to your head. Well it's not too heavy, and won't come off when I shake my head, so I guess it can stay. The man holding your lead unclips it and step back. The crowd goes silent. You take two steps forward, and as a group they follow you, shuffling forward ever so slightly. Okay, now this is weird, why in Vishnu's name are these crazy people following me? Or are they? What if I go over to that hay bale? As you walk towards the tasty snack, the people all follow you, always maintaining enough distance to be out of kicking range. What a shame.

You wander towards the river at the end of the field. Surely they'll stop me if I try to cross the river. They always have before! You step forward and feel the cold water rush over your hooves and ankles, but no one makes a move to bring you back. You plunge across the river and... the crowd follows? Well this is odd. Let's see how far these silly people will follow me...

With that thought, you begin to walk...

via PixHere


Author's Note:
The idea behind this story was to write the first half of King Yudhishthira's Horse (David A. Mackenzie) as if the reader had been reincarnated as the horse to be used in the sacrifice. This will hopefully be the first part of the story uploaded to my project (finally). If all goes well, it will be accompanied by the second half of this story as well as Horse Sacrifice to be one of the three lives the reader will go through before reaching heaven.

Thursday, February 27, 2020

Reading Notes: Mahabharata (Part D)

62. Drona in Command, Romesh C. Dutt

  • All of these battled end at nightfall
    • How do the warriors decide where to take a break?
    • What does that look like?
65. Death of Drona, Sister Nivedita
  • This would be a very touching scene to rewrite from a soldier's POV
    • The visual of the two suns is very powerful/spiritual
66. Bhima and Duhshasana, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • Is Bhima a VAMPIRE?????????
67. Arjuna and Karna, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • Horse
    • Rewrite from the horse's perspective for my project?
      • How would the horse die?
  • Karna's speech
    • Is he talking to himself?
      • This part is confusing
    • Perhaps Karna has Schizophrenia
68. Duryodhana in the Lake, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • Underwater internal monologue
74. King Yudhishthira's Horse, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • Very detailed about the horses journey
    • This would be the most useful for my story book
    • Rewrite from the Horse's perspective
75. Horse Sacrifice, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • Combine with 74. King Yudhishthira's Horse to make horse story
    • The horse can be the last incarnation given that it ascends to heaven
via PXFuel.com

Tuesday, February 25, 2020

Reading Notes: Mahabharata (Part C)

43. Arjuna and Shiva, Sister Nivedita

  • Alternate ending:
    • What if Arjuna simply offered the boar to the god, as he had only shot in self-defense
  • Arjuna's POV
50. Riddles at the Lake, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • This could be narrowed down and written more personally as a nice father/son reunion
51. The Court of King Virata, Donald A. Mckenzie
  • An exploration of any one of the party's professions/day-to-day life could be fun
    • Journal entry?
52. Bhima and Kichaka, C. A. Kincaid
  • This sounds like the start to a crime show
    • Law and Order: SVU?
via NeedPix.com

Thursday, February 20, 2020

Reading Notes: Mahabharata (Part B)

21. House of Fire, C. A. Kincaid

  • What message was passed to Yudhishthira?
  • POV from the night of the fire?
    • Or even just more detailed
33. Arjuna and Subhadra, Donald A. Mackenzie

  • Rewrite as a drama at the palace after Subhadra disappears

Not a whole lot of inspiration with this reading. It's probably the sleep deprivation. :)

I'm... So... Tired...
Via Flickr

Wednesday, February 19, 2020

Reading Notes: Mahabharata (Part A)

2. King Shantanu and Ganga, Donald A. Mackenzie

  • Seeing the babies cast into the river from the King's perspective
  • Palace servants opinions on the children suddenly going missing?
  • Why did Ganga not just tell Shantanu what she was doing?
8. Kunti and her Son, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • How did Radha's husband feel about her bringing home a rindim child?
  •  What was Karna's trio down the river like?
9. Pandu and His Wives, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • This is twice now that he's killed a deer only to find out it was a human
    • What has to be going through Pandu's head???
  • I'm also imagining the second interaction as a cop getting chewed out by a thug for arresting him mid-activity
18. The Arrival of Karna, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • How would this have gone if Kunti had claimed Karna?
Not related to the reading at all, just a visual representation of me losing my mind over the last two weeks
via PublicDomainPictures.net

Friday, February 7, 2020

Storybook Plan

I decided to do a storybook! While it might be a tad more work in the end, I think I'll have more fun doing a storybook rather than a portfolio.

My theme will be reincarnation. The reader will cycle through three lives as different animals featured in the Ramayana.

I had thought to make it an interactive story where the reader can choose which order in which to reincarnate, but that maybe a little too complicated to make all of the possible outcomes flow together.

I found this article on HowStuffWorks.com that I think will be a useful crash course on the religion my stories will be based on.

The stories will likely be written in second person. This is an uncommon method, but I think the perspective will fit with the storytelling well.

I had previously identified three possible stories to get inspiration from in my Topic Research post, and I think Kumbhakarna from part D this week could also be a good resource!

Comment Wall

CLICK HERE to check out my storybook!

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2/7/2020 - I've just put up my storybook site! It's still a work in progress, hence the current status of the homepage. Go have a look!

3/24/2020 - The introduction page is now finalized and the first story has been completed!

4/6/2020 - Story two is up! I also finally fixed my comment wall link issue.

4/21/2020 - I didn't realize I hadn't updated this in a while. My storybook is basically complete! All but one of the buttons works now and I'm actively working on the solution for the straggler. I hope you have fun with it!

5/1/2020 - My final edits have been submitted! The last button is a little clunky visually, but I had an ah-ha moment just a little bit ago on how I could update it. Unfortunately, the function I'm trying to achieve requires some coding skills, so I don't have time to do it before the class ends. It might end up being my summer "for fun" project though!

Thursday, February 6, 2020

Week 4 Story: Lakshmana threatens Sugriva

How did I get here again? Lakshmana thought to himself as he strode towards the heavy chamber doors that led to Sugriva's throne room. Right, the ungrateful bastard has decided to ignore all of the help my dear brother gave him in regaining his throne and, more importantly, the debt that is owed.

Lakshmana had watched Rama pace the floor of their house for nearly three months now. Sugriva had sworn to assist the brothers in locating and retrieving Rama's wife, Sika. Preparations with the troops and planning strategies should have begun at least a month prior to this, and the deadline was approaching for the agreed upon timeline. Tired of watching his older brother slowly come unravelled, Lakshmana had decided to handle the matter himself.

He threw open the doors and stormed into the great chamber. "Sugriva!" He bellowed. The cry echoed off of the walls of the enormous room and brought the music to a halt and all eyes to him. Sugriva had been hosting yet another party. Good. This meant there would be many, many witnesses to pressure the king into fulfilling his promise.

"Lakshmana, my dear boy, what brings you to this marvelous shindig? I figured you and your brother would never come to my home. I've sent the both of you close to 100 invites now... Where is Rama? I must once again thank him for his help in restoring me to my throne." As Sugriva went to move around Lakshmana in search of Rama, he suddenly found himself hoisted by the neck and pinned against a pillar. The guards made a move for their weapons and began closing in on the pair, but Sugriva waved them down.

Lakshmana cleared the red haze of anger that had clouded his vision and released Sugriva's neck. He slumped to the floor, clutching his throat and gasping for breath. He then spoke loud enough for the whole party to hear, "my brother is still at home, pacing a hole in our floor, because you have decided to neglect your end of the bargain for your assistance in bringing his dear Sita back to him. Now Ramam is a gentle, forgiving soul, but I am not. It would do you well to get your lazy, self-centered ass up off of whatever lounging chaise you've been having the maids hand feed you your dinner on before I chop it off and serve it to you on a platter. Do you understand me?"

The silent room let out a collective gasp at the threat on their kings person, but no one stepped forward to defend him. They were all mostly in shock at the idea that the great Sugriva had neglected his debts.

"Yes Lakshmana, I understand you completely. I will begin gathering my troop tonight so that their training my start tomorrow."

"You had better. If I had have to come down here and talk to you again, there will be pain," Lakshmana practically growled before spinning on his heel and exiting the room through the door he had entered, doing his best to slam the heavy slab of wood on his way out.

via Pixabay

This story is meant as a fill-in-the-gap or behind-the-scenes type of thing. The gap that was open to be filled was how Lakshmana convinced Sugriva to honor his promise to Rama in The Armies. I hope you enjoyed it!

Reading Notes: Part D

63. Indrajit, Sister Nivedita

  • Rewrite from Rama's perspective
    • Sita's wailing wakes him
    • Then Garuda appears
      • Very Christmas Carol
64. Kumbhakarna, Donald A. Mackenzie
  • The elephants could be one of the reincarnations for my storybook!
70. Battle of Rama and Ravana, Sister Nivedita
  • It is mentioned that the gods had fated Rama to kill Ravana
    • TV show?
    • Game of DnD?

Dungeons and Dragons via Dyess Air Force Base


79. Sita Daparts, Sister Nivedita
  • I want Sita to be angry when she first receives Rama's summons. He abandons her for YEARS and suddenly wants to make amends?
80. Rama Departs, Sister Nivedita
  • BUT WHERE'S SITA?????
    • I want a reunion goddamnit!

Wednesday, February 5, 2020

Reading Notes: Part C

42. Sugriva's Story, Geraldine Hodgson

  • A retelling of Vali's fight with the beast could be fun
    • From Vali's of Sugravi's perspective
44. Vali's Death, Romesh Dutt
  • I would really love to rewrite this so the brothers work things out rather than trying to kill each other
47. The Armies, Donald A. MacKenzie and Romesh Dutt
  • An expansion on the seen where Rama threatens the kings life would be interesting
    • How did that conversation go?
    • How did everyone else in the room react?
53. Sita and Ravana, Sister Nivedita
  • How many times has Ravana asked her to join him?
  • What has Sita's imprisonment been like from her perspective?
  • What if one of the guards had a change of heart?
57. The Burning of Lanka, Sister Nivedita
  • I can just imagine Hanuman's smugness when his binding is released
  • A telling of this story from his perspective would be fun to write
Rama and Sita via Flickr

Monday, February 3, 2020

Topic Research: A Split Decision

Deciding to do a storybook vs a portfolio project is shaping up to be a tough call. On one hand, I have a bunch of half-formed story book ideas swirling in my head that would all be a load of fun to try. On the other hand, I know a portfolio will be an easier option given how hectic my schedule already is. I thought taking only 13 hours would be easy, but I'm already dying.

If I were to do the story book option, I think I would want to tell a story of one soul being reincarnated as a bunch of the different animals that appear in the readings. The Animal Characters of Ramayana page has a list of some of the more notable animals present in the story, and individual animals are also listed. Horses and Elephants have their own entries on the Readings and Resources page.

While I absolutely love the idea of creating a choose your own adventure style story, that would require a significant amount of forethought and planning that I'm not sure I'll have the bandwidth for. However, a predetermined storyline with the same premise is not out of the question.

Alternatively, I could do a portfolio that would allow me to use pre-written pieces without needing to worry about making them flow together.

So far, the stories I have read that could be of use to this particular project are:


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